hmmm, here is what i have to say
alright, whether your using samples, or vst's, the notes clash quite a bit. one is in major, and another part is in a minor. the drums were pretty good, but if you need to put clashing melodies togo.ether, you should either separate them and organize them according to the mood of the song, either way though, just keep practicing, and keep making beats, and you'll become better with time, if you check out my earlier stuff, you'll know what i mean :)
keep it up, and you'll only get better